Hook Redux

I really wasn’t happy with last night’s hook so I redrew it. I think this one is an improvement but there’s still problems.

First on the left, Redux on the right.

Do you think it’s an improvement?

2 thoughts on “Hook Redux

  1. Me, too. The first one looks more vintage and sad, and vain. Romantic. The second one looks more intense and uptight.

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